Hey these episodes are gettin better Aaron
The only thing that I can comment on is the sound (I bet you're gettin sick of hearing this) It still lacked a lot just like the previous episodes, The fighting was pathetic, it just sounded like two kids were playing slapsies (slaping each other) If I think you could improve anything I would say sound... put more ambient sound into it for example, in some scenes like when the retrievers are in the woods or whatever, add some birds in the background or a few car from a nearby road. Sound is very important for effect, if you thought that the fighting scene was a little 'under-paced' put in some harder music and try to make the whole scene look rushed, if you have speech aswell in a fight scene, observe animes like Gunmm - When Gally fought Grewicca and she then went into a monologue about how she cut his servo, she was in mid-air and the scene was slowed down because she wasnt in battle. If you can add this pace to your anime it will look very pro. The artwork is very impressive by the way and I'm glad that there is somebody out there that can give newgrounds a certain standard of work. I would much prefer watching series other than simple one-off shorts and dumbass stickmen. IF 'ns49er' -who reviewed you before me, had actually looked at the best flashes he would notice that 'college university' and 'squigo' are very popular, both series' and both top notch. he's just an abused asshole probably with a lot of rage to vent. hehe L8R